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afansi
04-04-2008, 03:40 PM
Hope by Medoruma Shun (translated by Steve Rabson)

It was the lead story on the six-o'clock news. The small child of an American soldier had been missing, and today the corpse was found in the woods not far from the Koza city limits. All eyes of the customers and employees in the diner were glued to the television screen. The marks of strangulation had been found on the body, and now the prefectural police were using evidence from the abandoned corpse in their search for the murderer. After reciting these details, as usual in "crime stories," the report moved on to interviews of people on the street. "Now I'm afraid to let my kid walk around outside. Even Okinawa's becoming a dangerous place." When she saw the woman of about fifty who appeared on the screen, the waitress yelled out gleefully, "Hey, it's Fumi. Look! She's on TV!" A fat woman wiping the sweat off her face came rushing out of the kitchen, but the screen was already showing something else, and both women groaned in disappointment. Now the reporter was commenting on the killer's declaration that had been mailed to the office of a local newspaper. Next to him lay a copy of the evening edition with a photograph of the declaration on the front page. What Okinawa needs now is not demonstrations by thousands of people or rallies by tens of thousands, but the death of one American child. It had been written in menacing red characters with sharp angles and straight lines.

A taxi driver slurping a bowl of Okinawan noodles grumbled, "They better nab him quick, and give him the death penalty." "Yeah, 'cause this'll hurt business too," the waitress chimed in. "The tourists won't come here any more." After panning pictures of the woods and Koza city from a helicopter, the report continued with statements by the governor and high U.S. and Japanese officials. They expressed "outrage" and "revulsion" at a crime targeting an innocent child. Stifling a laugh, I shoved a spoonful of curried rice into my mouth. There was no way their pompous pronouncements could hide their exhaustion and bewilderment. That Okinawans--so docile, so meek--could use such tactics was something the bastards had never even imagined. Okinawans were, after all, a people who followed their leaders, and, at most, held "anti-war" or "anti-base" rallies with polite protest marches. Even the ultra-left and radical factions staged, at most, "guerrilla warfare" that caused no real harm, and never carried out terrorism or kidnappings against people in power, or mounted armed attacks. Okinawans were like maggots who clustered around the shit of land rents and subsidy monies splattered by the bases. And Okinawa was called "an island healed by the love of peace." It made me want to puke. I left the diner, crossed the pedestrian bridge at Goya Corners, and walked along Airport Avenue. Orders must have come down restricting all military personnel to their bases. No American soldiers in civilian clothes were out walking the streets. A camouflage-colored jeep drove past. A patrol car, its red alarm light gyrating, was parked in front of the gate at Kadena Air Base. High above a row of poinciana trees, a white crescent moon hovered like the fang of a poisonous habu snake. I stopped and stood for a moment. Only the worst methods get results, I muttered to myself. On the other side of the street, a television camera was swivelling. I turned into a side street and was careful not to quicken my pace as I walked back to my apartment. From the refrigerator I took out a can of iced tea and drained it in one gulp. Then I sat down at my desk and wrote the address of the newspaper office on the envelope I had put there. Opening one of the drawers, I took out a small cellophane bag containing strands of straw-colored hair. The child's face in profile came again before my eyes.

The kid had been sleeping in the back seat of a car parked in the supermarket parking lot. A white woman who looked only about twenty yelled several times, but the kid didn't wake up. After she went into the market alone, pushing a shopping cart, I tossed my empty iced tea can into the trash bin and walked across the parking lot. I got into the car that had been left idling with the air conditioner on, and pulled out onto the prefectural highway. I drove north for about fifteen minutes, then turned off into the woods on the north side of a municipal housing project. Only after the car began rattling along this bumpy road did the kid wake up. When I heard crying from the back seat, I stopped the car. Turning around, I saw that the kid had gotten up and was trying to open the door. He was a boy and looked about three. I quickly parked, turned around and tightly grasped his little crying and screaming body. As I finished strangling him from behind, something burst in the back of his throat and a gob of filth dribbled onto my arm. I wiped it off with the kid's shirt, and started the car again. I drove around to the rear of the woods, and parked in the shadows of an abandoned pig shed. After wiping the steering wheel and door handles with my handkerchief, I moved the kid to the trunk of the car. Then I twisted some strands of his straw-colored hair around my fingers, ripped the hairs out, and folded them up in my handkerchief. All over my body, covered with sweat, goose-flesh had broken out. On my way out of the woods, I buried the car keys and, after walking to the national highway, transfered taxis twice on the way back to my apartment. The air conditioning in my car had little effect and, even when I opened the windows, my sweat kept pouring. I took the envelope containing the hairs to Naha city and dropped it in a mailbox. On the way back I stopped at the seaside park in Ginowan. This had been the site of that farcical rally after the twelve-year-old girl was raped by the three American soldiers, when 80,000 people gathered here but could do absolutely nothing. Now it seemed so long ago. I had finally done what I'd thought about doing that day as I'd stood on the edge of the crowd. I felt no remorse now, or even any deep emotion. Just as fluids in the bodies of small organisms which are forced to live in constant fear suddenly turn into poison, I had done what was natural and necessary for this island. When I reached the center of what had been the rally site, I poured a bottle of gasoline syphoned from the car on my jacket and pants. The fumes stung my eyes. Then, taking a hundred-yen cigarette lighter from my pocket, I spun the flint-wheel. Flames sprang up in the darkness, and, toward the walking, tumbling fire a group of middle school students came on the run, then cheered as they took turns kicking the smoking black lump.

P_chan
04-04-2008, 03:48 PM
Dude.....WTF are you trying to say by posting this? Just as something informative, or do you have a hidden motive?

http://media.urbandictionary.com/image/large/wtf-18374.jpg

SPMF#1
04-04-2008, 04:37 PM
This is probably the most sick, sedistic thing I have come across in a long time. Exactly what is you motive behind this beyond attempting to spread fear or hate?

afansi
04-04-2008, 06:11 PM
This is probably the most sick, sedistic thing I have come across in a long time. Exactly what is you motive behind this beyond attempting to spread fear or hate?

So the gang rape wasn't a sick sadistic thing? Medoruma only wrote about it; US military personnel act it out.

Before you reply, please list all the assaults, rapes, robberies and murders that have actually been committed by Okinawans against US military personnel in recent years.

Then we can compare like with like.

afansi
04-04-2008, 06:20 PM
Dude.....WTF are you trying to say by posting this? Just as something informative, or do you have a hidden motive?

http://media.urbandictionary.com/image/large/wtf-18374.jpg

You can make up your own mind, but I'm glad you left the door open to the first possibility. If I have a hidden motive, I think I revealed it in my reply to the second post.

DougP
04-04-2008, 06:20 PM
well compared to the strangulation of a boy, yes, ribbons definitely represent hope.

badkitty
04-04-2008, 06:29 PM
Wow.... Dude, really??

DougP
04-04-2008, 06:43 PM
First off let me just start by saying I understand the underlying message embedded in this short story. However its is very disturbing in nature and although I do understand the use of shock tactics(like a slap to the face) to shake people into seeing the reality of something, I do not agree with it.

If I may, afansi, allow me to try and put this into perspective or at least offer my view of this. This story graphically depicts the(in what I can only hope is fictitious) murder of a young child. This story of course stirs up several emotions and I'd imagine they are even more intensified amongst those with children. Be that as it may it does offer some insight into the emotions experienced by those who have been victims of heinous crimes or family members of those victims.

The purpose of this directs our attention towards the backyard of others in which we live today. A portal into the current and past atrocities that have happened locally on this soil. It mainly brings something even more disturbing to light. Our general reactions to them. After reading this story I nearly vomited in my own throat. Horrified by how graphic its was and sadden by the fact that this was written like a manifesto depicting the actual desires and intentions of someone. But why was I or any of you upset at this? Was it the horrific crime depicted or that a child was murdered in this story? Was it because there's some sort of personal connection due to the child's nationality and ours? I can't be too certain. But one thing that I do know is that I was more appalled at this short story than I was upon hearing of the actual murder of the cab driver in Yokosuka.

I know I've had those thoughts of what it would be like during those last few moments and wondered what kind of thoughts would be running through my head. Would they be of my family, would they be of despair knowing the inevitable was approaching? Well applying that and using it to try and understand what the taxi driver must have been going through puts this story a little more into perspective. I do wonder why still, I wasn't as horrified by the real murders and rapes as I was by this short story.

afansi
04-04-2008, 07:48 PM
DougP,

You've put together a couple of fantastic and really thoughtful posts today that make me feel fully vindicated in using what you call "shock tactics."

I have nothing whatsoever invested (morally, spiritually or financially) in the United States or it's Project for a New American Century, but as an aside I'd like to mention that the story was translated by an American, and introduced to me by an American.

It was also posted on an American website originally (the Japan Policy Research Institute).

Maybe your reaction also had something to do with the local setting.

Try reading Jean Genet's Querrelle of Brest and see if you experience similar queasy feelings.

DougP
04-04-2008, 08:10 PM
DougP,

You've put together a couple of fantastic and really thoughtful posts today that make me feel fully vindicated in using what you call "shock tactics."

I have nothing whatsoever invested (morally, spiritually or financially) in the United States or it's Project for a New American Century, but as an aside I'd like to mention that the story was translated by an American, and introduced to me by an American.

It was also posted on an American website originally (the Japan Policy Research Institute).

Maybe your reaction also had something to do with the local setting.

Try reading Jean Genet's Querrelle of Brest and see if you experience similar queasy feelings.

afansi, I'm more than pleased that through some past conversations that we have been able to meet on some sort of middle ground and discuss things civilly. I do hope that your satisfaction and feeling of being vindicated does not necessarily mean that you will continue to use shock tactics. Your intent seems to be that you want to open the eyes of others and present another view. This of course is fine and a noble attempt given the general make up of the members here and the position you take up. If your aim is truly that of an educator and not that of an instigator might I suggest changing things up a bit on your approach. There is an obvious group here that makes up the majority of posters on here. One that I do not have to go into detail about as you are already aware of this.

With that said if you want to present your views and have them bear fruitful results you may want to adjust your pitch. The shock and awe OPs do not generally produce the desired results as far as actually getting people to think, are concerned. I am aware now that this is your style and I have adjusted accordingly to it in a way that I don't get overwhelmed every time I click on one of your threads. Many other will never be receptive to this type of approach. If you are truly the messenger and not the protagonist than this will not be collectively complimentary to your objectives. Again I enjoyed
actual being able to discuss these subjects on the level with you. You have been very civil with me and I appreciate that. I do wish however you would offer that same civility you've shown me towards others, even if they appear not to deserve such in your eyes. You've proven to me one thing here today, regardless of views, convictions or even nationalities for that matter, its possible to have a calm, kind and prosperous exchange of dialog. cheers.:)

P_chan
04-04-2008, 08:32 PM
And your hidden motives would be....? The only "tactics" I've seen you use so far is to post a bunch of anti-military anti-american propaganda all over the board. That certainly isn't a new tactic, and I'm sure just about everyone on the board has seen it used before. Now, I'm not saying the military is completely innocent. However, the constant "America is the bad guy, everybody hate him!" tone of your posts is getting rather hmmmmm let's say repetitive and platitudinous.

afansi
05-19-2008, 02:02 AM
afansi, I'm more than pleased that through some past conversations that we have been able to meet on some sort of middle ground and discuss things civilly. I do hope that your satisfaction and feeling of being vindicated does not necessarily mean that you will continue to use shock tactics. Your intent seems to be that you want to open the eyes of others and present another view. This of course is fine and a noble attempt given the general make up of the members here and the position you take up. If your aim is truly that of an educator and not that of an instigator might I suggest changing things up a bit on your approach. There is an obvious group here that makes up the majority of posters on here. One that I do not have to go into detail about as you are already aware of this.

With that said if you want to present your views and have them bear fruitful results you may want to adjust your pitch. The shock and awe OPs do not generally produce the desired results as far as actually getting people to think, are concerned. I am aware now that this is your style and I have adjusted accordingly to it in a way that I don't get overwhelmed every time I click on one of your threads. Many other will never be receptive to this type of approach. If you are truly the messenger and not the protagonist than this will not be collectively complimentary to your objectives. Again I enjoyed
actual being able to discuss these subjects on the level with you. You have been very civil with me and I appreciate that. I do wish however you would offer that same civility you've shown me towards others, even if they appear not to deserve such in your eyes. You've proven to me one thing here today, regardless of views, convictions or even nationalities for that matter, its possible to have a calm, kind and prosperous exchange of dialog. cheers.:)

Well, I'm sure many Americans share your views. At the same time, though, I think it is fair let people know that not all Okinawans feel the same way about the US military occupation.

TheNoNamedOne
05-19-2008, 02:24 AM
I had missed this thread.

The story in the OP is quite interesting. It is a valid way to get people to think on issues and to jump out of their skin into the skin of others. A lot of people, however, have super glue holding their skin to them, so they are unable to make that jump.

DocTurtle
05-19-2008, 05:32 AM
Interesting short story.

romosexual
05-22-2008, 06:56 AM
yeah it is...

bad_karma
05-24-2008, 09:51 PM
Back before the 2000 G8 Summit, I was tasked with coordinating an interview for the TIME magazine Tokyo bureau chief for the special Okinawa issue they put our right at the time of the Summit. The interview was held in Nago and the interviewee was the author of this story, Medoruma Shun.

I believe he wrote this story sometime between the '95 "incident" and the lead-up right before the Summit. This story was discussed in the interview. Medoruma is actually a very well-known author and was awarded the 1997 Akutagawa Prize, one of Japan's most prestigious literary awards. He is a fierce advocate of Ryukyuan independence. A very opinionated man.

Don't let the story fool you. He is a very intelligent man, not a monster, and you better believe he was making a statement with the story, as I believe DougP picked up on.

Peace,

BK out

Sex Wax
05-25-2008, 04:28 AM
I think it is a cool story. I believe now, being educated, that white round-eye peeps, we should take all of our technology, religion, and everything the "west" has done, and just commit mass suicide. We suck, and there is no forgiveness in the hearts of other less fortunate countries for us. Shame on us! How dare we do anything! Or at the very least, we should close our borders, distribute the Jim Jones Juice, and just say "Fvck the rest of the world" We were wrong, let Rome fall...again. Let the Juntas, and Religious Zealots rule!

OCanadaOurHomeAndNativeLand
05-25-2008, 09:23 AM
Let the Juntas, and Religious Zealots rule!
Does "W" not qualify?

Son Kokujin
05-25-2008, 10:11 AM
Afansi...interesting post, to say the least. It reminds me of some of the police and crime mini-novels that I used to read. But it seems that once again, you are attempting to paint all US-Military servicemembers with the same generalization...I could be wrong, and if so, please explain to me why.

Yes, there are a precentage of morons in the US Military community who need some serious discipline applied to them, but the same could be said about EVERY group of human beings that live on this planet.

Afansi, you come off as intelligent with the eloquent way you express yourself in some of your posts, but you also diminish such attributes when you start to play the same old "Yankee Go Home" rhetoric.

But...I do realize that it's easy to criticize, blame, insult, and point fingers from the assumed "safety" of the internet. If I am wrong...show me how, without insults.

afansi
06-26-2008, 02:59 AM
Hope by Medoruma Shun (translated by Steve Rabson)

It was the lead story on the six-o'clock news. The small child of an American soldier had been missing, and today the corpse was found in the woods not far from the Koza city limits. All eyes of the customers and employees in the diner were glued to the television screen. The marks of strangulation had been found on the body, and now the prefectural police were using evidence from the abandoned corpse in their search for the murderer. After reciting these details, as usual in "crime stories," the report moved on to interviews of people on the street. "Now I'm afraid to let my kid walk around outside. Even Okinawa's becoming a dangerous place." When she saw the woman of about fifty who appeared on the screen, the waitress yelled out gleefully, "Hey, it's Fumi. Look! She's on TV!" A fat woman wiping the sweat off her face came rushing out of the kitchen, but the screen was already showing something else, and both women groaned in disappointment. Now the reporter was commenting on the killer's declaration that had been mailed to the office of a local newspaper. Next to him lay a copy of the evening edition with a photograph of the declaration on the front page. What Okinawa needs now is not demonstrations by thousands of people or rallies by tens of thousands, but the death of one American child. It had been written in menacing red characters with sharp angles and straight lines.

A taxi driver slurping a bowl of Okinawan noodles grumbled, "They better nab him quick, and give him the death penalty." "Yeah, 'cause this'll hurt business too," the waitress chimed in. "The tourists won't come here any more." After panning pictures of the woods and Koza city from a helicopter, the report continued with statements by the governor and high U.S. and Japanese officials. They expressed "outrage" and "revulsion" at a crime targeting an innocent child. Stifling a laugh, I shoved a spoonful of curried rice into my mouth. There was no way their pompous pronouncements could hide their exhaustion and bewilderment. That Okinawans--so docile, so meek--could use such tactics was something the bastards had never even imagined. Okinawans were, after all, a people who followed their leaders, and, at most, held "anti-war" or "anti-base" rallies with polite protest marches. Even the ultra-left and radical factions staged, at most, "guerrilla warfare" that caused no real harm, and never carried out terrorism or kidnappings against people in power, or mounted armed attacks. Okinawans were like maggots who clustered around the shit of land rents and subsidy monies splattered by the bases. And Okinawa was called "an island healed by the love of peace." It made me want to puke. I left the diner, crossed the pedestrian bridge at Goya Corners, and walked along Airport Avenue. Orders must have come down restricting all military personnel to their bases. No American soldiers in civilian clothes were out walking the streets. A camouflage-colored jeep drove past. A patrol car, its red alarm light gyrating, was parked in front of the gate at Kadena Air Base. High above a row of poinciana trees, a white crescent moon hovered like the fang of a poisonous habu snake. I stopped and stood for a moment. Only the worst methods get results, I muttered to myself. On the other side of the street, a television camera was swivelling. I turned into a side street and was careful not to quicken my pace as I walked back to my apartment. From the refrigerator I took out a can of iced tea and drained it in one gulp. Then I sat down at my desk and wrote the address of the newspaper office on the envelope I had put there. Opening one of the drawers, I took out a small cellophane bag containing strands of straw-colored hair. The child's face in profile came again before my eyes.

The kid had been sleeping in the back seat of a car parked in the supermarket parking lot. A white woman who looked only about twenty yelled several times, but the kid didn't wake up. After she went into the market alone, pushing a shopping cart, I tossed my empty iced tea can into the trash bin and walked across the parking lot. I got into the car that had been left idling with the air conditioner on, and pulled out onto the prefectural highway. I drove north for about fifteen minutes, then turned off into the woods on the north side of a municipal housing project. Only after the car began rattling along this bumpy road did the kid wake up. When I heard crying from the back seat, I stopped the car. Turning around, I saw that the kid had gotten up and was trying to open the door. He was a boy and looked about three. I quickly parked, turned around and tightly grasped his little crying and screaming body. As I finished strangling him from behind, something burst in the back of his throat and a gob of filth dribbled onto my arm. I wiped it off with the kid's shirt, and started the car again. I drove around to the rear of the woods, and parked in the shadows of an abandoned pig shed. After wiping the steering wheel and door handles with my handkerchief, I moved the kid to the trunk of the car. Then I twisted some strands of his straw-colored hair around my fingers, ripped the hairs out, and folded them up in my handkerchief. All over my body, covered with sweat, goose-flesh had broken out. On my way out of the woods, I buried the car keys and, after walking to the national highway, transfered taxis twice on the way back to my apartment. The air conditioning in my car had little effect and, even when I opened the windows, my sweat kept pouring. I took the envelope containing the hairs to Naha city and dropped it in a mailbox. On the way back I stopped at the seaside park in Ginowan. This had been the site of that farcical rally after the twelve-year-old girl was raped by the three American soldiers, when 80,000 people gathered here but could do absolutely nothing. Now it seemed so long ago. I had finally done what I'd thought about doing that day as I'd stood on the edge of the crowd. I felt no remorse now, or even any deep emotion. Just as fluids in the bodies of small organisms which are forced to live in constant fear suddenly turn into poison, I had done what was natural and necessary for this island. When I reached the center of what had been the rally site, I poured a bottle of gasoline syphoned from the car on my jacket and pants. The fumes stung my eyes. Then, taking a hundred-yen cigarette lighter from my pocket, I spun the flint-wheel. Flames sprang up in the darkness, and, toward the walking, tumbling fire a group of middle school students came on the run, then cheered as they took turns kicking the smoking black lump.

Just thought I'd quote this again for those who thought I was misrepresenting Medoruma's position on another thread.